Hi, everyone! Welcome to week eight of the Summer
Love Blog Tour!
The countdown is on
until the debut of my first novel, THE FIRE WALKERS, available where books are
sold July 1st, 2014.
There’s only TWO WEEKS
left, I’m in awe.
And to celebrate, I’m
giving you the inside scoop on how my romantic suspense novel came to be.
Last week we got to
meet my fireball hero, Aidan. Tough on the outside, and all heart within, you
know it takes a special girl to win this arson detective’s love.
With my astrological theme in place, and my fire hero finally speaking to me, my next step was to
work on my heroine. The first chapter of the story struck fast, a good fire omen, with chapter two keeping pace as Aidan
allowed me to follow him around.
And Aidan doesn’t dawdle. That’s
one of the many things I like about him. True to fire form, he goes for what he
wants and quick.
So I found myself at
the beginning of chapter three with one problem.
My
heroine still didn’t have a name.
Throughout chapter one
(her third-person subjective perspective), I marked her name with a bold H for “heroine” while I got the
creative surge down, so I could go back and fix it later.
It was an unexpected
hurdle because my fire heroine had been clear to me from the beginning, I knew her. Open minded, a bit
overly-optimistic, she was my happy-go-lucky, bouncy Sagittarius girl. I could
see her thoughts and mannerisms in my head lucidly, right down to the red tint
of her auburn hair. Heck, her point of view was what got the story going in the
first place.
Typically I can iron
out a name pretty fast, especially with all the data I had on her, but for some
reason, my fire girl’s moniker kept eluding me. I would see her face in my mind
and bounced names around, trying to find one that felt right, but none of them seem to stick. Weeks
passed and I found myself stuck in the middle of chapter three with a nameless
heroine. The conundrum smacked of irony because a person’s name is tied to their
ego, and one’s ego is a fire concept, for sure.
Aries are ruled by
Mars, the planet of action and energy. They are driven leaders, the personification
of a strong sense of self.
Leos are ruled by the
sun, which represents royalty, actors, and the glamorous. They almost always
have a great head of hair (a Leo theme), and a bold sense of style. They are natural
kings and queens, born to be in the spotlight. In THE FIRE WALKERS, Sophie is
my Leo lady.
One of my favorite lines
describing her is:
“Sophie
passed through the spotlight without so much as a squint, unfazed by the blast
of illumination.” -
THE FIRE WALKERS, Shelley N. Greene ©
As a daughter and
sister to women with Leo planets, I can tell you there’s a special warmth to the
affection of Leo. And they can get self-righteous when angry. The Sun rules pride,
and any slight on their reputation can set them off. A fuming Leo can literally
turn their nose up as if you are beneath them.
You see here that theme of ego popping up again, but I’ll tell you the secret:
Make them laugh. Nothing smooths the ruffled feathers of a regal Leo more than a good, tasteful joke.
You see here that theme of ego popping up again, but I’ll tell you the secret:
Make them laugh. Nothing smooths the ruffled feathers of a regal Leo more than a good, tasteful joke.
And there is no better
jokester than a Sagittarius. Sags have a satire wit about them that stems from
the honest way they view the world. It’s kind of blunt how they point out
the incongruities in life, and instead of being disturbed by it, they find it all absurdly funny.
Ruled by Jupiter, Sagittarians are expansive. They see the big
picture, and they draw luck to themselves by creative visualization. Blindly
optimistic, they always envision a good outcome. Even if they fail and land
flat on their butt, they dust off, see the good in the “lesson” they learned, and
try again.
That revelation confirmed
an inkling I’d been having about my fire girl.
She had to be weak in
fire, like me. While Aidan had had his fire dimmed, she was trying to build
hers in the first place. He'd be walking towards her from the strong side of the fire spectrum, while she'd be starting with a candle’s flame that needed, with his help, to be stoked into a blaze. Her sign, Sagittarius.
The Sag symbol is a
centaur; half man, half horse. (Horse farm anyone?)
Jupiter/Sagittarius
themes include: luck, gambling, horses, higher learning, publication, the law
and long journeys. Sag restlessness has power enough to level buildings. They climb the walls until the resistance gives way. They’re a bit clumsy, too. It’s as if their enthusiasm trips them up. They fall going upstairs.
Astrological Sidenote: Anytime I’m rushing (fire theme) I tend to knock my head (Aries area of the body) on stationary objects. Unconscious actions will point to where you should be paying attention. It’s weird.
In my own chart I have a strong Jupiter
influence, and I think that’s why I related to my heroine in several ways. Jupiter
energy is limitless, open; it has no boundaries. My fire heroine believes that
everything will work out if she just keeps
trying, she never gives up. She doesn’t like to be fenced in and the risks
she takes aren’t practical, they’re spontaneous. True to Sag nature, she fails
to see the forest from the trees, even with the danger encroaching in on her.
And with all these
beautiful nuances in her character, I couldn’t find a fitting name. I felt like
she deserved something unique.
Aidan had been Aidan
from day one, and lucky for me (ßJupiter Reference)
his name means “Little Fire.” Or just “fire” because no one calls him little.
My fictional horse-hero,
too. I’ll give you his deets next week, he’s something else. Another horse at
the farm is even named after one of Jupiter’s moons. And yet I remained stumped
with the name of the most important character in the book.
For weeks I listened to
music and browsed pictures to try to find inspiration.
I wanted something
simple, sanguine, and natural.
Lisa?
No.
Jennifer?
Close, but no cigar.
Amy?
She doesn’t look an Amy…
The music helped the
scenes in my head develop as the heroine’s personality haunted me. I wrote each
night and went to work each day with girl names rolling around my brain. I’d
meet people and analyze their name to try to get a starting point.
That week it so happened that I
was needed to serve customers on a drive-thru intercom where one of
the speakers kept having technical problems. When I’d greet the person I’d say,
“Hi, my name is Shelley” to which I got “Hi, Kelly” in reply.
The first day it didn’t bother me that much, but
by day three the phonetic misunderstanding started to bug me. As a firm believer
in road signs from the Universe, I should have realized it that moment, but I
was too blind to see it. As Friday rolled around I was super busy greeting and
running the speakers, when three people back-to-back said “Okay, Kelly.”
Hand on the corded neck
of the microphone, eyes glaring a hole through the tempered glass, I mentally
squashed the urge to get back on the horn and enunciate the fact that “My name
is Shelley, not Kelly.”
But before my finger
reached the green talk button the discovery two-by-four whacked me between the eyes.
Kelly.
KELLY. What in the heck does the name Kelly mean?!
I rushed home that
night and looked it up. It means Witty.
I grinned. My fire girl
is witty. And positive and loyal and sincere. And her laughter is like
sunlight. She’s a Kelly.
The Universe had been
trying to tell me that all along. Even the music I’d been listening to was by
an artist of the same name.
I pulled up my
manuscript and did a find and replace. Reading through it, I felt a great
relief. It sounded right when Aidan said it, when I channeled her thoughts.
I continued writing,
and I got chills when Kelly walked into Keegan’s stall for the first time. Like
planets aligning, the energies and the names matched up:
“‘I’m
Kelly. I’m here with your dinner.’ The words came out the way she intended:
gentle, comforting. In response the horse went motionless as a sculpture, the flare
of his nostrils the only sign of life emanating from him.”
- THE FIRE WALKERS, Shelley N. Greene ©
- THE FIRE WALKERS, Shelley N. Greene ©
Action and impulse are
fire themes, and I knew that I was on the right track. When Kelly meets her
horse, her kindred spirit, the connection comes with an impact.
Fire attracts fire.
Next
Week: Think
I can’t pack any more attitude into one story?
Hoofed, hungry, and four-legged - MEET KEEGAN
See
you then!
- SNG
Glad you finally found a name for her! It's tough when one doesn't automatically come to you.
ReplyDeleteHow about Jillian-Jill for short?
ReplyDeleteCarol Rubright
That's a pretty name! I finally figured out Kelly for this heroine, but I'll keep Jill in mind for the future. Thanks, Carol. :0)
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